Thank you for sharing your input, Lezlie

I wasn’t aware this article was used as an example for Medium articles nor have I read how Medium writing should be done.

From a very young age, I have observed how the BAU system we’re in systemically molds unnatural behaviors.

It’s possible your master’s in writing may have groomed you to expect how writing should adhere to a template (haha, I empathize with the essays of the thousands of college students you have graded who do not fit into your box).

fyi, when it comes to tackling problems, Karl Popper divides the world into two types of people/approaches: “All problems are either clocks or clouds.”

For an explanation of clocks and clouds: https://bit.ly/2RAUrIC

From observation and experience, I know clock thinkers will find it extremely hard to grasp how cloud thinkers connect dots (how I write is deliberately not academic) vs constantly over detailing on a singular clock topic in silo.

Someone commented earlier and she’s right that this is kinda “very INTJ.”

I’m not writing to have my writing graded as this is an experiment, a very simplistic one to boot, to observe if humanity is ready for a shift out of a world where to survive, we the Greatest fools https://bit.ly/2Vcu0uI have been addicted to co-creating a world system that’s legally more tailored for corporate persons (especially Big Business) than real people.

Because we really cannot solve systemic challenges with the same BAU logic used to create them ... hope this provides some food for thought.